A punctuation question with a description after the blank tests how extra information fits into a sentence. Read ahead and find where the main sentence picks up again. Remove the description to check that the surrounding words still work together. Check what each mark needs: commas or dashes can surround extra information, and parentheses pair together. A colon needs a complete sentence before it; a semicolon joins two complete sentences.
Hints
- Hint 1
Read past the building features. Where does the sentence begin to say what the final design documents revealed?
- Hint 2
Look for the mark at the far end of the description. What would removing the building details leave on either side?
- Hint 3
Check how the building details fit into the full sentence. Do the words around them form one sentence or separate sentences?
Step-by-step
Find the insert and match its marks
Step 1Separate the promise from the result
Although the architectural firm promised begins a thought that can't stand alone because of Although. Where does the sentence move from the promise to the result? At the final design documents revealed, where the main part begins. The promise needs the part about the documents to complete the sentence, so we need punctuation that lets those two parts work together.
- Step 2
Test the building description
What do original limestone cornices and wrought-iron balconies add to the sentence? They name the features of the historical façade, so they're an insert, a stretch of extra information. Crossing out those details leaves the firm's promise to preserve the façade followed by the news in the design documents. The words still make a complete sentence once we use the normal comma between the opening Although part and the main part.
- Step 3
Test the words before the blank
The punctuation in balconies—the final design documents revealed shows where the description ends and the main part starts. Could the blank instead mark a break between complete sentences? The words before the blank can't stand alone, because Although makes them depend on the later part about the documents. A colon needs a complete sentence before it, and a semicolon needs one on each side, so the colon and semicolon versions don't work.
- Step 4
Match the two ends
A dash closes the insert at balconies—the, so a dash must open it. The version façade, the would mix a comma with a dash, while façade—the gives a matching pair. The closing dash also separates the opening Although part from the main part, so we don't add a comma beside it. Choice C.