Question 174·Hard·Form, Structure, and Sense
Prepared in meticulously regulated greenhouses that replicate the humid understory conditions of tropical forests, _____ are shipped to botanical research centers worldwide for studies on their extraordinary resistance to fungal diseases.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
For sentence-structure questions with an introductory phrase, first locate the main verb in the base sentence (here, are shipped) and determine what the subject must be. Then check that the introductory modifier logically describes that subject and does not attach to the wrong noun (avoiding dangling modifiers). Eliminate any choices that insert extra subjects or verbs, add redundant wording, or cause illogical meanings. Finally, read the full sentence with your remaining choice to confirm it sounds clear, concise, and grammatically complete.
Hints
Think about what is being prepared
Look at the opening phrase: Prepared in meticulously regulated greenhouses.... Ask yourself: what thing in the sentence could realistically be prepared in a greenhouse?
Identify the subject of "are shipped"
The words in the blank must act as the subject of the verb are shipped. Make sure the choice you pick can stand as a complete subject noun phrase before are shipped.
Watch for extra verbs or pronouns
Some choices insert extra verbs (like ships or receive) or an extra pronoun (they) that can make the sentence ungrammatical or clunky. Eliminate any option that creates a confusing or doubled subject-verb structure.
Avoid illogical or redundant wording
Be wary of options that make the sentence say that a team or a research center is prepared in a greenhouse, or that repeat long phrases unnecessarily.
Step-by-step Explanation
Spot the core of the sentence
Strip the sentence down to its core:
- Introductory phrase:
Prepared in meticulously regulated greenhouses that replicate the humid understory conditions of tropical forests, - Main clause (after the blank):
_____ are shipped to botanical research centers worldwide for studies on their extraordinary resistance to fungal diseases.
So the blank must be the subject of are shipped and must be something that can logically be “prepared in meticulously regulated greenhouses.”
Match the introductory modifier with a logical subject
The phrase Prepared in meticulously regulated greenhouses... should describe whatever comes immediately after the comma.
- If we plug in a choice, ask: Is this the thing that would be prepared in greenhouses?
- A research team or research centers themselves are not prepared in greenhouses; plants (orchid specimens) are.
This lets you eliminate any option where the word right after the comma is not something that could reasonably be prepared in a greenhouse.
Eliminate choices with modifier and pronoun/structure errors
Test each wrong option:
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Choice A:
Dr. Halstrom's team ships orchid specimens that ...- After the comma, the subject is
Dr. Halstrom's team, so the sentence implies the team is prepared in greenhouses, which is illogical (dangling modifier). - It also produces a wordy structure:
ships orchid specimens that are shipped....
- After the comma, the subject is
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Choice B:
botanical research centers worldwide receive orchid specimens that ...- Here,
botanical research centers worldwideis what’s said to be prepared in greenhouses, which again makes no sense. - The phrase
botanical research centers worldwideis also unnecessarily repeated later.
- Here,
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Choice C:
fungal disease–resistant orchid specimens, which Dr. Halstrom's team cultivated, they ...fungal disease–resistant orchid specimensis a logical thing to be prepared in greenhouses, but the extra pronountheycreates an error.- You get:
orchid specimens, which Dr. Halstrom's team cultivated, they are shipped...— this has an unnecessary, ungrammatical second subject (they).
All three have clear structural or logical problems, so they must be eliminated.
Confirm the remaining choice works smoothly
The only remaining option is:
- Choice D:
the orchid specimens cultivated by Dr. Halstrom's team
Plug it in:
Prepared in meticulously regulated greenhouses that replicate the humid understory conditions of tropical forests, the orchid specimens cultivated by Dr. Halstrom's team are shipped to botanical research centers worldwide for studies on their extraordinary resistance to fungal diseases.
Now:
- The introductory phrase logically describes
the orchid specimens(they are what’s prepared in greenhouses). - The subject
the orchid specimens cultivated by Dr. Halstrom's teamcorrectly matches the plural verbare shipped. - There are no extra pronouns or repeated phrases.
So the correct answer is D) the orchid specimens cultivated by Dr. Halstrom's team.