Question 33·Hard·Boundaries
In her 2022 memoir Fault Lines, geologist Priya Anand insists that patience—an approach to research that ______ “allows the rocks to finish their sentences before you interrupt”—is the most valuable lesson she learned in the field.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
For punctuation “boundaries” questions, first identify the grammatical structure around the blank—especially the subject and verb. Then recall specific comma rules: do not put commas between titles and names when they form one unit, and do not separate a subject from its verb with a comma. Quickly test each choice against these rules, eliminating any option that breaks them, rather than relying on what “sounds right.”
Hints
Focus on the role of the underlined phrase
Think about what the missing words are doing in the sentence. Who is doing the action of “says” in that clause, and where is the verb?
Titles + names and commas
Look at how the word mentor and the name Glen Howard are used together. Do we usually put commas between a title (like teacher, coach, doctor) and a person’s name when they come right next to each other?
Subject-verb separation
Check whether any answer choice puts a comma right before “says.” Is it generally correct to put a comma between a subject and its verb?
Step-by-step Explanation
Identify what belongs in the blank
Read the sentence with the blank:
In her 2022 memoir Fault Lines, geologist Priya Anand insists that patience—an approach to research that ______ “allows the rocks to finish their sentences before you interrupt”—is the most valuable lesson she learned in the field.
The blank will be filled with a short clause containing the subject (someone described as a mentor with the name Glen Howard) and the verb “says.” So we are choosing how to punctuate a subject made of a title + name, followed by a verb.
Apply the rule for titles and names
When a title comes directly before a person’s name as one unit (for example, scientist Marie Curie, doctor Lisa Chen, coach Rivera), we do not use commas between the title and the name.
Commas would only be used if the name were extra, nonessential information, as in “my mentor, Glen Howard, …” (which implies you have only one mentor and are just adding his name). Here, though, the phrase is part of the main identification, so the title and name should stay together without commas between them.
Apply the rule for commas between subject and verb
We almost never put a comma between a subject and its verb. For example, we say “My teacher explains the problem”, not “My teacher, explains the problem.”
In this sentence, the whole subject is the person with the role mentor and the name Glen Howard, and the verb is “says.” So there should not be a comma between the subject and “says.” Any answer choice that inserts a comma there is incorrect.
Eliminate incorrect comma placements and choose the remaining option
Now check each choice:
- Choices that put commas around the name (like mentor, Glen Howard, says) wrongly treat the name as nonessential extra information.
- Choices that put a comma between the subject and the verb (like mentor Glen Howard, says) wrongly separate the subject from its verb.
- The only answer choice that keeps mentor and Glen Howard together without commas and does not separate the subject from says is “mentor Glen Howard says.”