Question 18·Hard·Boundaries
During the 1904 World's Fair, visitors marveled at cutting-edge agricultural _____ demonstration of a portable milking machine, fascinating crowds, its rhythmic pistons promising dairy farmers a future of increased efficiency and reduced labor.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
For SAT punctuation/boundaries questions, always first test whether the text before and after the blank are independent clauses or dependent phrases. Then recall: semicolons and periods require complete sentences on both sides; a colon must follow a complete sentence and then can introduce an explanation, example, or list; and a single comma cannot safely link or introduce full ideas by itself. Eliminate any option that creates a fragment, a run-on, or unclear structure, and choose the punctuation that best matches the grammatical relationship (list, example, contrast, etc.) between the parts of the sentence.
Hints
Check if the part before the blank is complete
Read from the start of the sentence up to the blank. Does that part already form a complete sentence (with a subject, verb, and complete thought)? This affects which punctuation marks are allowed there.
Decide what the phrase after the blank is doing
Look at "the demonstration of a portable milking machine, fascinating crowds..." Is this a full sentence by itself, or is it giving more information or an example related to what came before?
Match punctuation to structure
Remember that semicolons and periods require full sentences on both sides, while a colon can introduce an explanation or example after a complete sentence. Ask which choice fits that pattern here.
Test each choice logically
Mentally plug in each punctuation choice and see whether you get two complete sentences, a sentence plus explanation, or a fragment. Cross out any choice that creates a fragment or blurs the relationship between the ideas.
Step-by-step Explanation
Identify the main clause before the blank
Read up to the blank: "During the 1904 World's Fair, visitors marveled at cutting-edge agricultural inventions ___"
Ask: Is this a complete sentence (an independent clause)? Yes.
- Subject: visitors
- Verb: marveled
- Complete thought: visitors marveled at inventions.
Because we have a complete sentence before the blank, any punctuation we choose must be able to come after an independent clause.
Understand what comes after the blank
Now look at the words after the blank: "the demonstration of a portable milking machine, fascinating crowds, its rhythmic pistons promising dairy farmers a future of increased efficiency and reduced labor."
"the demonstration of a portable milking machine" is not a complete sentence; it is a noun phrase. It gives a specific example or explanation of the “cutting-edge agricultural inventions” that visitors marveled at.
So the punctuation in the blank must connect:
- a complete sentence (before) to
- a phrase that explains or illustrates that statement (after).
Match punctuation to the structure
Recall the basic rules for these punctuation marks:
- A semicolon (;) and a period (.) must connect two independent clauses (two complete sentences).
- A colon (:) must come after an independent clause and is used to introduce an explanation, example, or list. What follows does not have to be a complete sentence.
- A comma (,) cannot substitute for a colon or semicolon; using a single comma to link or introduce a full explanation often creates unclear or incorrect structure.
Here, we have:
- Before the blank: a complete sentence.
- After the blank: an explanatory example, not a full sentence.
So we need punctuation that can follow a complete sentence and introduce an explanation/example.
Eliminate incorrect punctuation choices and select the best one
Apply the rules:
- Comma option: Treats "the demonstration of a portable milking machine" as a loose, nonessential appositive after "inventions." That blurs the structure and uses a comma where we really need clear introduction of an example.
- Semicolon option: Wrong, because "the demonstration of a portable milking machine" is not an independent clause; a semicolon cannot precede it.
- Period option: Wrong, because it would start the next sentence with "The demonstration of a portable milking machine, fascinating crowds, ...," which is a fragment, not a complete sentence.
The only mark that correctly follows an independent clause and introduces a specific example is the colon, so the sentence should read:
"During the 1904 World's Fair, visitors marveled at cutting-edge agricultural inventions: the demonstration of a portable milking machine, fascinating crowds, its rhythmic pistons promising dairy farmers a future of increased efficiency and reduced labor."